Purpose: Janie's hopelessness is displayed through her pleas to God that Tea Cake will return to her and Janie's longing for the ideal love.
Topic Sentence 1: In the first paragraph, Hurston uses Annie Tyler to represent Janie's fear of the future.
Topic Sentence 2: In the second paragraph, Janie debates what she will do if Tea Cake does not come back, and prays to God that he comes back, despite her mistakes.
Topic Sentence 3: In the third paragraph, Janie's desperation for Tea Cake is contrasted with the imagery of the sunrise to create a more uplifting mood.
Trevor comment:
Nice Trevor. I like how you thought that the sun was personified to seem like a character. The repetition of the sun throughout the whole book is a good thing to recognize.
Josh comment:
Nice Job Josh. I like how you recognized that Tea Cake was Janies' motivation. After Tea Cake left it really seemed like Janie was in a predicament, and she was very lost without him. Nice use of literary terms.
Karl comment:
Good job Karl. I like the fact that you noticed the contrast of them putting Annie to bed, and then Janie getting out of bed. I didn't notice that before and I think it is a good point.
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